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Response 14

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Peer Reviewing Drafts, Abstracts and Descriptive Outlines:

 

GIVE THE AUTHOR(S) SIX COMMENTS AS FEEDBACK: post on their new page, linked at the bottom of this page.

 

1) Comment on Exigence

  •   In the abstract, does the author provide clear exigence for the project?  In the outline, do they seem to strive to make it clear why they think the topic they have taken up is a timely one or one in need of an argument? 

 

 

2) Comment on the Evaluation and Proposal claims.

  • Is the evaluation claim clear?  Are their clearly noted criteria that need proving/arguing? (or does the author seem to be 'preaching to the choir'?)  How strong are the criteria? 
  • Is part of the project clearly directed toward forwarding a proposal? I.e., is it clear that a fundamental objective of the paper is based around a proposal?
  • How strong are the criteria that the writer is using to compose their proposal? Do they provide appropriate means for examining the strength of their proposal and determining the positive negative consequences of the proposal's acceptance?

 

3) Comment on Research

  • Does the argument seem to draw on enough research in appropriate places?  What areas seem to be well researched?  What areas might need further research (and what kind?)

 

4) Comment on LOGOS or arrangment

  • Does the author's 'method' seem well-thought?  Are the parts of the argument sufficient and persuasive to you?

 

5) What is the strongest counterargument you can think of to refute the argument or a major claim in this paper?

 

 

6) Give the author the top two or three priorities in their next phase of writing/revision.

 


 

Perrin Atisha - Response Fourteen

Amy Schneider- Response 14 Morgues

Derek Blanton - Response (14) Fourteen

Travis Rodery - Travis Rodery- Response 14

Nour Ghamrawi - Response 14

Toma Blue- Response 14 Toma Blue

Hannah Livernois- Response 14:) SIONREVIL!!

Farah Sheikh Abstracting project 4.docx  (your feedback: farah.mp3 )

Adam KlaserResponse 14-The Tree of Life

Paul Elden - Paul's 4-5 Reverse Outline and Abstract

Dillon Fitzgerald Response 14 EDM

Anisa Bezhani response14

Marielle Frattaroli: Abstracts (reality tv)

Sasha Haynes:Sasha's Response 14.docx (FEEDBACK: sasha.mp3 )

Daree Shannon-http://a1020.pbworks.com/w/page/45723913/Shannon%2C%20Daree

Ahmed Alshaibani- Project 4

Yashvir Riar - Response 14

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