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Samey Abdulrub

Page history last edited by Samey Abdulrub 9 years, 8 months ago

My name is Samey and i like cookies :D

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Ahmed is the man

 

Project 3 Draft: Terrorism

About the Author (Samey)

Project 2 Rough Draft

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Project 1 : Adidas AdiZero

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (2)

Colton Michael Dale said

at 1:08 pm on Sep 20, 2011

a) Good hook into the paragraph and yes it is clear that the ad in question is the adidas adizero ad campaign
b) The thesis, although a bit dry and boring, clearly conveys that the main rhetorical device Adidas uses is the use of popular sports figures in the ads.
c) The thesis is clear, but you should expand on the middle of the paragraph and linking the hook to the thesis.

Samey Abdulrub said

at 11:47 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Thanks for the feedback Colton

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