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a) Good hook into the paragraph and yes it is clear that the ad in question is the adidas adizero ad campaign
b) The thesis, although a bit dry and boring, clearly conveys that the main rhetorical device Adidas uses is the use of popular sports figures in the ads.
c) The thesis is clear, but you should expand on the middle of the paragraph and linking the hook to the thesis.
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Colton Michael Dale said
at 1:08 pm on Sep 20, 2011
a) Good hook into the paragraph and yes it is clear that the ad in question is the adidas adizero ad campaign
b) The thesis, although a bit dry and boring, clearly conveys that the main rhetorical device Adidas uses is the use of popular sports figures in the ads.
c) The thesis is clear, but you should expand on the middle of the paragraph and linking the hook to the thesis.
Samey Abdulrub said
at 11:47 pm on Sep 20, 2011
Thanks for the feedback Colton
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