Hooked on Rhetorical Analysis
Team 3: Ahmed, Nour, Samey,Toma', Derek
In “Don’t Blame the Eater,” David Zincenko argues that the hazardous overconsumption of fast food products is a battle between corporate responsibility (companies providing their consumers with necessary and essential information regarding the effects of their product) and personal responsibility (individuals’ ability to choose what’s best for themselves). He argues this point by using logical appeal and comparing the food industry to the tobacco industry.
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Team 4: (a.k.a. the Inglorious Basterds)
In “Don’t Blame the Eater”, David Zinczenko argues that fast food companies are responsible for children obesity through the use of personal experience and statistics.
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What categories would include these examples?
Better thesis statements stated the argument clearly (and with just enough explanation or summary) and set up the rhetorical techniques as general categories, broad enough to set up the rest of the (hypothetical paper), and selected those that are certainly present and important in the work under review.
Much like the work you'll be taking up for your execution of Project Two, Fame Junkies is a book-length argument that is organized around a central thesis, but divided into distinct sections (both sections and chapters in this case) that support that thesis and perform the rhetorical strategy of the book in particular ways.
For today's class, we will collectively work on creating an appropriate thesis statement for a rhetorical analysis of Fame Junkies.Afterward, we'll break into teams that will collaboratively compose supporting paragraphs for that thesis based on the chapter of FJ that they were assigned.
We can get closer to a rhetorical analysis thesis statement for the book by asking some basic questions about the introduction to Fame Junkies:
1. First ask: What is the (most) general argument of the book?
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2. What are the key Stases being deployed here? (the form or forms of claims being made: definition, evaluation, resemblance, proposal?)
Resemblance: ?
Definition: ?
Evaluation: ?
Proposal: ?
3. What are the most prevalent, important, or interesting strategies used to support this argument in the introduction?
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Halpern, in Fame Junkies, uses X, Y, and Z, to argue T.
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In W, A argues T through X, Y, Z.
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A uses X, Y, and Z to argue T.
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In Fame Junkies Jake Halpern, through the use of his personal reporting builds a logos involving the varied use of academic studies (including psychology, neuroscience and anthropology), historical and individual case studies to argue that the North American obsession with fame resembles an addiction. The book also builds an effective appeal to pathos through the individual case studies that demonstrate how deranged some people have become.
The Question Now is: How might we leverage the skeletal structure thesis to generate paragraphs for rhetorical analysis of for Fame Junkies?
Now that we have a skeletal thesis statement to work with in our practice rhetorical analysis of Fame Junkies, let's work up possible supporting paragraphs for this thesis. Break into your teams and write a supporting paragraph for this analysis based on the chapter of FJ you were assigned. Most likely your paragraph will focus on how one of the strategies in our thesis statement is deployed in that chapter. When composing these, keep the supporting paragraphs from our previous student examples in mind as well as what we learned about quoting and summarizing from readings in They Say/I Say.
1. A transition that opens the paragraph. An easy way to segue into your new paragraph is to introduce the technique under review in relation the previous one. For instance, you might write:
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2. You need sentences that provide examples of the technique under review in the paragraph. Effective use of quotations from, or paraphrases of, the text being analyzed will be valuable in this section. Here's the "examples" section of a paragraph from "Making Ends Meet" on the author's use of personal experience as a rhetorical technique:
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3. Finally, you need to relate the examples back to the thesis of the text being analyzed. Doing so reminds the reader of the central argument of the text and how the technique you're covering in this paragraph is, as you have stated, important to the forwarding of this argument. Here's the last two sentences of the same paragraph (on the use of personal experience as a rhetorical technique) quoted above, followed by similar "relating" sentences from the text:
Ehrenreich does not merely come up with ideas arbitrarily, and the use of statistics proves to the reader that what she expresses has genuine evidence.
All of these concluding sentences either explain why the technique described in the sentence that preceded it were effective and/or how it forwards the central argument of the book being analyzed.
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Value: 5 points |
Due: Fifth Response due before 9 AM, Tuesday
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